Flat, faint, and foggy
Indistinct and quite unformed
Empty,
like the souls of men.
It lies barren
Lifeless
Dead
But then the wind starts,
The hand of God
Brushing away the faint wisps,
Then as the window clears
Everything stops
A pause in the gigantic
gears of time
Then the words begin to flow
Cities rise
And fall
Mountains break the ground
Challenging the sky
Life forms, and races around
In all of its
beautiful,
Twisted shapes
The universe explodes with
Possibilities, and constantly they change
Monsters run rampant
With angels chasing them
Back o’er the hills
Into the mouth of Hell
Or maybe we see the castle and the
Plumber chasing his lost princess
Or a political struggle within
Or the attackers
Just outside the walls
Or maybe all we can see
In the window
In the page
In the word
Is us.
Derek,
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed reading your piece. I agree, good literature starts from nothing but a blank page, yet it is transformed into something beautiful. Your diction in this poem was created very vivid imagery. Also, while reading the article, I noticed repeated alliteration, and was glad to see it incorporated in your post. Honestly, I can't think of anything that was missing in this poem at the moment.
Derek - I love how you hint at your meaning; how you yourself paint the picture that you claim good writers can do. It is perfection in that it mimics that which you claim. Nice work. :)
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